I am proud and excited to welcome you my next guest in the 13 Days of Horror, Laura Eno and her chilling tale, Note To Myself.

By Laura Eno
Jessie pushed on the bureau drawer, jiggling until it closed almost flush with the front of the antique dresser stored in the attic. Waxing the rails hadn't helped and months of nagging Robert to take a look had proved fruitless.
She didn't want to part with the dresser. It was the only thing she even vaguely remembered from her life before the accident. Robert said it was because of the sentimental value. The piece had belonged to her grandmother.
Sweet Robert. Even though she didn't remember anything, he'd helped her build a new life, never leaving her side in those frightening first few months. Jessie couldn't imagine life without him, especially once the doctor informed them that her amnesia was permanent.
Working the drawer out, she decided to look at it on her own. Maybe something was jammed in the rails. Reaching in, her fingers closed on a bit of paper, crumpled and smashed against the back. She fished it out and unfolded the receipt from the market, dated two years ago—the same day as her accident. She shook as if chilled and her gut clenched as she wondered how it got there.
Jessie started to toss it aside when she noticed words on the back. Despite the hurried strokes, she knew it was her own handwriting. An inexplicable dread tightened its hold on her throat. She sucked in air as she started reading.
Jessie,
Your life is in danger. Robert isn't human. None of them are. They've locked me in the attic while setting up something to erase my memory. I overheard part of a conversation, just enough to know they're shape shifters.
Jessie touched the scar on her head. She'd been told it was from a car accident. There was more on the paper, written in a cramped style. Her hand shook as she tried to read the rest.
I'm hoping you'll find this before it's too late. I overheard Robert talking to the doctor, discussing how shape shifter children kill their human host at birth. Whatever you do, don't get pregnant!
The note fluttered to the ground from fingers gone numb as the first contraction hit.
©2010 Laura Eno
BIO: Laura Eno lives in Florida with a very tolerant husband, three skulking cats and an absurdly happy dog. She has a pet from the Underworld named Jezebel and a skull called Mr. Fluffy who help her write novels late at night. Please visit her strange imagination at http://lauraeno.blogspot.com
OHHH!! WHat a bang! i like the strange mechanisms here that help the story unfold. The ending is bizarre. This has "Howl" written all over it, see my blog for the link...I'll be waiting. :)
ReplyDeleteWhat a nasty, unexpected twist for Jessie at the end. Didn't see that one coming! Great job, Laura.
ReplyDeleteEvil, pure evil and very tasty at that.
ReplyDeleteI love a good unhappy ending for horror stories. Especially in flashfic, you're free to let the bad guys win. This is an awesome example of that.
ReplyDeleteThe opening sucks us in and makes us care for Jessie, and then - ever so carefully, you set us up for a nasty bombshell. Wonderful write Laura.
Thanks for all the great comments and I'm blushing at the awesome intro, Erin! Thanks for having me!
ReplyDeleteWOAH!! Fantastic story in so few words. One of my favourites!!
ReplyDeleteWell done, Laura.
Wow. I had a feeling that as soon as she read that part of the note she was pregnant, but I wasn't sure how you'd pull it off. That was great, Laura!
ReplyDeleteTerrific ending!
ReplyDeleteExcellent story. I suspected that Robert might not be so wonderful, but I never thought it would end in such a tension packed way.
ReplyDeleteNancy
N. R. Williams, fantasy author
My thoughts are : if shape shifters can be born, they can be killed. Robert would be on my endangered species list were I Jessie.
ReplyDeleteYou drew us in magnificently, Laura. Great job with the stinger at the end, Roland
Oh. Absolutely AWESOME.
ReplyDeleteCompletely fabulous. Loved the domesticity of it until... hmmmn - the note; wham! - the words; gasp!!! - contractions. And all in seconds.
ReplyDelete(And I really did gasp out loud.)
Oh, nice twist at the end, Laura (if I may call something that horrible "nice." And thanks, Erin, for posting Laura's chilling tale. This looks like a great blog to get us in the Halloween mood.
ReplyDeleteOh no. Didn't the ultrasound tech say anything about the dog-snout that suddenly disappeared at a second look?
ReplyDeleteGreat piece!
Lydia's comment just cracked me up!
ReplyDeleteThank you all for the awesome comments!
What can you say with an ending like that! Always love the way Laura's writing twists us through the characters and the unknown, and then catapults the reader into delightful darkness. Fine penning, as always!
ReplyDeleteAnd none of that introduction is bullshit.
This was a delcisous slice of Laura evil. Love the whole shapeshifter/wiped out memory thing. Twisty ending. A delight to raed as always, girl.
ReplyDeleteWonderful hook! You did it quickly and expertly.
ReplyDeleteLadies and Gentlemen,
ReplyDeleteThis story has just been accepted into the upcoming Red Skies anthology Howl: Echoes of The Hunt. http://redskiespress.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=howl
Well done, Laura!
Thank you, Mark! I'm delighted!
ReplyDeleteGreat story, Laura. You do short horror so well.
ReplyDelete~jon
I've heard of mothers eating afterbirth but I've never heard of afterbirth eating mothers.
ReplyDeleteLove the note from her 'former self.' So intriguing. So cool, this story. And so cool for Erin hosting this here show.
Splendidly set-up for the cool and decidedly twisted ending. A fine write, indeed!
ReplyDeleteOh I like this Laura! Makes me wish I knew someone with permanant amnesia just to prank with "old" notes. Excellent read!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for the wonderful comments, all!
ReplyDeleteWOW! Talk about a nightmare. That was a great read. The twist at the end was fantastic!!!
ReplyDeleteVery cool! That's not the way you want to find out you're going to die, that's for sure...
ReplyDeleteLaura of Horrah ~ Is this a premeditated murder of preceding oneself? It certainly has great expectations laboring forth from what a stuck drawer can open to fortell. Superb premise deserving the Howl's hail. Hear that? {{applause, applause}} ~ Absolutely*Kate
ReplyDeleteA WINK FOR ERIN < You know how to pick the talents of the twisters, don'tcha?
Thanks so much! You're all fabulous for commenting!
ReplyDeleteWhat a great tale! Loved the twist leading up to the unfortunate and too late end!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Edgar!
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